These are four of my final design and I would really appreciate any feedback before I develop them and begin to add colour.
Thanks
Logo Feedback Wanted
| Tuesday 8 April 2008
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Out of the four design, I would choose the forth design. However, I would try adapting the design to use a more modern typeface.
I agree with Mark, and as we discussed in the seminar session, I think number 4 needs tweaking to get it sorted. Maybe a different typeface, which finishes at the same point vertically, with the emitting dot above the 'i' above all the other letters too.
Hi James
As I have already discussed with you during class and seminar class, my personal choice has to be number 4. There is however, an inherent issue with the small 'emitions' from the top of the letter 'i'; when the logo is reduced to a very small size, they (some at least) would be very difficult to see, if visible at all.
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Shaun Bellis
One thing I wouldn't do is choose the one with the emitting dot above the I, it's a really common solution from this design; as I think nearly everyone has done one when looking around the room. I'd also try persuade you to move away from using the actual name as your logo, from these concepts it seems like you've kinda stuck to using this method.
Try getting abit more avant-garde about your designs, instead of them being straight down the line.. generic designs. You need something with brand recognition that people are going to remember. Not just a decoration for the labels work.
I think im preferring logo number four out of these designs. But how well does it go when the size it reduced I wonder???
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